Friends Only Lemon Draft
This journal was something that a certain *someone* talked me into for the purpose of incomplete stories, and shamelessly harrassing people out of comments on them! My current project is an Winry/Ed lemon which is in a friends only entry. Comment if you want to proof-read and make suggestions regarding it.
Those of you who have NOT commented at all, I'm likely to remove you from the friend's list. The only point of this is, as I said, to shamelessly beg for comments and coerce those friends who are willing into hopefully helping me write a decent lemon. Of course I'll probably wait a few days to do this, and if I'm lucky I might have the silly thing finished by then!
Those who have faithfully been commenting (I love you all, but particularly commenters) Small update today in which I made the Socket-Sex scene a bit more detailed in an effort to please a certain Eloy... With that done, I am rapidly running out of even minor distractions to stall while I procrastinate on getting to the main action. (I don't really MEAN to tease you all, really, I just always write the actual lemon bits slowest and last!)